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I... I can't even breathe.

And it feels like my heart is going to seize.

I don't know how much more I can take.

Just a little more and I swear I'll break.

I know that you don't want my love anymore,

and for this heartbreak there is no cure.

No cure but to have you back,

because without you my world is pitch black.

Baby, please, just come back into my arms,

and I promise to never do you any harm.

I'm so sorry; I take back everything that I said.

Here, just look at all of the tears I've shed.

This is all driving me insane,

so here I am slicing away at this same vein.

I can't even begin to describe the pain inside,

the pain that's almost drove me to suicide.

Darling, you know I'll always love you,

and those feelings will never be subdued.

 

 

Me and my girlfriend just broke up. And... yeah.
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the-stephy-powers Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:
I wish I had something more encouraging to say here, but I really don't have anything... It will get better tho. What's meant to be will be.
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah. I suppose
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KittySib Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww...*hug* I'm so sorry for yoyur loss...:(
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks. :hug: It's okay.
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KittySib Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is one of the most beautiful break-up-poems I've read, great work!
I know ther is no words to ease this kind of pain, I just hope it works out for you :tighthug:
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks.
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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OnlyYourPuppet Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Stay strong dude ^^
this was an awesome poem.
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha. Thanks. I'm trying. ><
Thankyou. :heart:
You're great.
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IceClawWolf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm soooo sooooo sorry :huggle-
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Don't be. It's not your fault. It's mine.
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IceClawWolf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I still feel sorry that that happened..... Sorry if I'm annoying you...
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Well thankyou. You're not annoying me. I'm sorry you thought you were. :(
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IceClawWolf Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
its fine. I didn't know if I was bothering you or not
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
No, you're not.
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