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All of the little girls


had perfect curly hair,


sweet lolllipops,


cute skirts,


sparkly shoes,


and they had daddies.


 


She lived in a trailer park,


had brown matted hair,


holy, ratty clothes,


dirty tennis shoes,


a mommy who was always high,


and no daddy; he didn't want her.


 


They all laughed and stared,


threw things at her,


called her names.


They wouldn't play with her;


whe was gross- why would they?


They thought she was weird- maybe crazy.


 


She isolated herself,


feeling insignificant and insecure.


She didn't like being home-


mommy's boyfriend hurt his kids,


and his kids tried hurting her.


She was afraid with no escape.


 


She craved attention so much


she did things her friends made her do,


even if she knew it was wrong.


But she wouldn't tell mommy,


she would scream


and make her cry.


 


She had no one to talk to,


no where to turn.


She was frustrated with the world,


and she hated herself.


She felt everyone rejected her.


 


One day she was finally pushed


to the limit.


She was ready to die,


to be done with life.


She was empty;


she was numb.


 


She found mommy's scissiors,


and breathed a sigh of relief.


Shaking all over


she stretched her arm out.


Eyes wide open and breathing calmly,


she carved into her arm, ripping her skin.


 


Oh the sweet pain.


It's finally over.


With blood slowly trickling


down her limp arm,


she laid down


and whispered goodbye.

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Fameisdead Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:( aww I feel bad for the little girl now... Great job though was very nice :)
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dreax3 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing, from the first sentence i knew it would be a powerful message
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Thankyou <3 It really means a lot c:
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dreax3 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :3
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DogsGoRAWR Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Photographer
wow, this is powerful, i love it, it gave me shivers up my spine
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks c:
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DogsGoRAWR Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Photographer
:D
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smileyface-101 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this gave me chills :( amazng
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student General Artist
thankyou :)
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smileyface-101 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
youre very welcome it was amazing
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Inu333 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
this gave me chills
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks :D
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Inu333 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem xD
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miapicassa Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know that story since i was 4 y/o.
now all grown up , with a heart that needs closure by helping little children,... i am rejected b/c i dont fit in.
i refuse to become like "norm requires", because, i like me. i wish someone else did too.
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Yep...this is me too.
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miapicassa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsadness:
mia
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singingmalaak Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thats so sad
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Yeah. :l
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singingmalaak Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i guess thats what happends when we are depressed thats why we need some one there to help us and to listen to us and to be there for us thats why we need friends.

i will watch you
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ThatOneArtistGirl Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Yeah.. exactly. Thankyou (:
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singingmalaak Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no problem
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